It's okay. I enjoyed it but didn't really see anything special about this. The story is sort-of adorable so I give you a few points there but nothing really stuck out as the potential this could have had. And the ending I feel is one of those "wut?" moments because it's to abrupt and random. I did like the idea of a slide-show feel to it, but it didn't really work with the way you presented the story. Keep it up though!